【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  l+ D6 T. l8 V( ^, I! w" W2 A我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" H. @4 y% G) K5 S, ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 T* P+ m7 R: S' N+ [0 d3 @From the first moment we met,
0 ]7 f! V2 P, _# eI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 X( Q0 Z$ c4 L$ W, V1 _7 X$ Q& Y! }Love… just the word love
) O; {$ U$ G9 T4 w7 M+ L1 {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* L1 _' y2 C* l1 Q) i( NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- V* h- n/ E9 ?; H# f- e( MLove… just the word love
/ G; q$ \6 X9 H2 A# u+ C3 H" F/ l5 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
% }# c; g5 A* Y6 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' H4 W. E$ r7 T$ h5 |8 `' Z' NIf today isn’t too late,
; F: @& p* L# c9 a4 R/ TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% o& j$ s  d/ Y1 G7 E  @  `" TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! W: D" J* j9 R" P1 T9 LCan I entrust it to you?
; s' A4 k! f  I( K7 {Entrust my love within your heart
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3 x2 y2 z6 i7 ~2 y: z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# d# J4 z- ]$ _. i3 T: }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& J$ ]8 ]5 P! E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 j5 G, W- G2 L- I9 K4 j  t3 X' Y) E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, e4 u# P6 l0 d3 e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 x( T3 P/ s! m1 L" i, p; j" p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ c" d0 o" W5 B2 a0 c: i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; k7 g! r, [: X- P9 m( @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; S2 I2 L2 {9 {" J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 Y" ]) ~6 D) R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* O$ ?4 L0 [* m6 \3 X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 f- J' Y! |$ W9 D( o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 d2 L9 p% |/ s& w( B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 `$ `7 z$ o  |& W2 e0 |- G5 z! D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 t% a/ `7 l2 }" ~. i: B+ k; P3 z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& W/ M: _. G) m4 g# \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# F( h+ e. ^, j8 B* B8 ]$ t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 f$ o: F9 j' n3 y  t8 ?+ T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 F( }1 W! Z$ ?$ d7 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ G) L# m; W9 j5 B1 [4 q3 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ Z' v" d  n6 w% [; {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: C- P: P7 ^1 k$ n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" r: Y% q! f5 F9 o2 a3 {6 A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 z3 F& B3 p4 B* k& L. U2 y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 P7 f; c% p0 u9 H  u3 k$ I( H: h0 `5 X" H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 w9 q" w: U, n% u* [# T2 `9 W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 I" N& D1 Y. @% S2 `; C& }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 I4 A% b/ [9 ]" D/ n: _4 |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, r& d5 [$ Y2 j9 {& A+ h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, E3 S) F6 f. ]1 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( I! b4 K/ Z5 h# E& o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( K1 d$ x' e+ Q2 q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 o+ q" S7 G0 M+ i' n% l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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' Z5 T! J( `& B* j& ?% e  ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>