【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 Y& @3 O1 ~2 \9 z% V) D( f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 T# v5 A+ _6 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- B% P: Z, z2 |6 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# g. a7 A/ K8 P9 {2 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 `5 Z& V5 D: G% H3 v/ jYou needn’t fear anything
8 Q& ]" Y. [4 O! }% Z! o9 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! `5 ]& g- x" G8 T3 nI really want to know just how much you love me
3 l3 f5 q" u+ R: fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 t0 z( @; T8 H& N4 q# Y8 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( L7 ?* P' J% Y$ `7 f2 f' J. {7 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. J, q- P& }- ^: [" i0 d, `( e0 EWith such a tongue as yours,
1 N1 j$ `$ O- h$ QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. j! D, E: J9 a$ gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 a% J! x- k3 L! q3 \1 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* j- R. q" }2 N& Q5 n7 c  e& v: ?3 u  e6 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 O- ?" f+ i$ R/ U9 l8 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 N4 f7 `2 h* V/ A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ `+ m' T$ n% U' ]$ b5 _/ y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, ]! f; S" Z0 \  S1 Y. ]3 h5 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 R. V3 Q/ |1 A8 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; ~, Z/ x7 U6 I; \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# ]1 `) u  A2 C4 q. E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ v; m+ E/ e1 D1 [7 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& V6 Y0 n8 y7 `' s- X! J; j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ~, ~9 A* O1 d2 m+ g# T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. b) L$ x4 H( `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  B$ N: W& p! {/ D4 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# n" n3 i; C' u" @5 z1 T$ ?8 U) E7 ~' N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# t' J0 ?: t0 i0 K* B! ^: H0 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 U0 j' J. _$ O0 K: n+ p& @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 P8 l7 ~5 q# |+ d  ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 P$ L5 Z( F$ ]* m* E# E, k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 Z- N0 ]( M5 s8 E! `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: S$ r: ?2 r+ L- R. @9 s* W2 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 a' r! M" f  f; \2 e. [' g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! c% V# F5 R! H% x5 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
' o- r6 C) o  `# N! ?  C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* B: _9 O, f0 m- t0 h; y1 {7 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- f9 c0 t7 V  I- l& `: {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 W2 m( W3 y* E4 @& ]/ \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 \$ z" n. E8 L3 S( y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( J$ k3 ^: D  R8 l8 S# c5 H3 H2 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& g; C7 a5 ~9 s- ^! Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: B. x( s% R! w2 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 _2 C2 _- O6 ?& [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% s, t5 y# \( o/ L0 Z+ I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 E' N8 B( N) S( f0 G! x我请你剖开它
2 A& x8 X4 V8 x
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>